睇左頭果段已經 O 曬咀
水蛇春咁長ge句子...要show你識relative clauses,咩participle係唔洗夾硬寫d水蛇春出泥...
好機械,係度諗用d深ge字去撻人不如諗下點令個篇文生動d ...
piyopiyo 發表於 9-3-2009 19:03 http://www.nakuz.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif
講真佢d深字都用唔岩位 = =""
雖然我睇完第一後都係唔明
但我發覺深字之餘
仲有語法上既mistake
乜make 後面可以用to咩
that clause 後面係用svo
我見唔到subject@@
就算用勁多深字
見到咁q多錯誤咪仲低分 好似好多勁人係到= =
我今年ce..英文真係得小學程序 唔緊要中四姐開頭係有少少虛榮心 比d補習社呃左你 以為用勁字就高分
慢慢諗多d訓練一下思考力 咁就可以寫得好d But i cant find that I've used make+to. made to write in this fashion,
不過應該可以用
因為in passive way,
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