I think this essay is off-track and messy
I will give a grade 2, unless he showed me his essay in a better resolution.
Don't say meaningless description(s) on your essay. Determination of your grade...
Deluxe 發表於 10-5-2009 23:12 http://nakuz.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif
這是一個大綱, 不是一篇文章
看來你失去了給grade 2的機會
本帖最後由 幻朧 於 11-5-2009 13:28 編輯
Really?
Grown children = teenager?
That depends on how I defined.
小莓。改 發表於 11-5-2009 12:59 http://www.nakuz.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif
what is your definition on grown and young children first?
P.S. I think it is hard to take a balance betweens two stands in a essay if you cannot express your idea very well. As the your stand will become quite unclear and marker won't have many time to mark your essay, you will have a greater chance to lose the content mark
這是一個大綱, 不是一篇文章
看來你失去了給grade 2的機會
小莓。改 發表於 11-5-2009 13:03 images/common/back.gif
I think he is not talking about whether this is an essay or not. It is because of your content
what is your definition on grown and young children first?
P.S. I think it is hard to take a balance betweens two stands in a essay if you cannot express your idea very well. As the your stand wi ...
幻朧 發表於 11-5-2009 13:26 http://nakuz.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif
我不需要定義, 因為我從頭到尾也沒有否認或確認何謂children
我是基於不同成長階段畫一個基本的分野線
30歲是children嗎? 40歲呢? 人人不同
是看你要學甚麼, 不是看你的年齡
我在下文有提過較小的children要甚麼, 較大的又要甚麼就已足夠
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我看到的是這樣....
我只是舉出idea, 不是定好文的標準
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你都唔係成篇文,好耐評架wo
樓主想拎5*...level 2 又未免低過頭...