評文 : 這會有grade幾

小莓。改

I think this essay is off-track and messy
I will give a grade 2, unless he showed me his essay in a better resolution.

Don't say meaningless description(s) on your essay. Determination of your grade  ...
Deluxe 發表於 10-5-2009 23:12

這是一個大綱, 不是一篇文章
看來你失去了給grade 2的機會

幻朧

Really?
Grown children = teenager?
That depends on how I defined.
小莓。改 發表於 11-5-2009 12:59

what is your definition on grown and young children first?



P.S. I think it is hard to take a balance betweens two stands in a essay if you cannot express your idea very well. As the your stand will become quite unclear and marker won't have many time to mark your essay, you will have a greater chance to lose the content mark

這是一個大綱, 不是一篇文章
看來你失去了給grade 2的機會
小莓。改 發表於 11-5-2009 13:03

I think he is not talking about whether this is an essay or not. It is because of your content

小莓。改

what is your definition on grown and young children first?



P.S. I think it is hard to take a balance betweens two stands in a essay if you cannot express your idea very well. As the your stand wi ...
幻朧 發表於 11-5-2009 13:26

我不需要定義, 因為我從頭到尾也沒有否認或確認何謂children
我是基於不同成長階段畫一個基本的分野線
30歲是children嗎? 40歲呢? 人人不同
是看你要學甚麼, 不是看你的年齡
我在下文有提過較小的children要甚麼, 較大的又要甚麼就已足夠
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我看到的是這樣....
我只是舉出idea, 不是定好文的標準
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j32738

你都唔係成篇文,好耐評架wo

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