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評文 : 這會有grade幾

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發表於 9-5-2009 19:59:33 | 顯示全部樓層 |閱讀模式
Task 2 topic 1

Brief idea:
Dear Editor,
#1 : Introduction : The argument between stay at home and send to school is no use if children are not classified by their age and their needs
#2 : Briefly talk about the definition of children : young and grown. They need different teaching method, due to different needs in different stage.
#3 - #5 : Talking about young children first, support teaching at home rather than send to school
  #3 : In children' view e.g. Their needs, the things they need to learn, mind
  #4 : In parents' view e.g. knowledge and time required, difficulties faced
  #5 : Other advantages e.g. avoid facing unmoral teachers
#6 - #8 : Talking about grown children, support going to school
  #6 : In children' view e.g freedom, auto. learn... , make contrast to #3
  #7 : In parents' view make contrast to #4
  #8 : Other advantages e.g. social manners ...
#9 To conclude no best method to teach but better to teach, parents should find out more method to help their children growth healthy

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What's the grade? [assume grammar isn't too bad]
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發表於 9-5-2009 20:04:01 | 顯示全部樓層
睇文唔係要睇埋D句子既深度嫁咩-0-
你果D只係結構  但唔錯!!!!!
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 樓主| 發表於 9-5-2009 20:13:26 | 顯示全部樓層
我背唔到篇文...或者講我唔想背
我怕我idea出錯
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發表於 9-5-2009 20:20:21 | 顯示全部樓層
ctk所言甚是
even though your idea is excellent,you may not get high level with lack of sentence pattern

或者有時候係可能用字用錯意思之類,都有可能令到個marker誤解你篇文
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 樓主| 發表於 9-5-2009 20:35:03 | 顯示全部樓層
Even though your sentence structure is better than the design of Water Cube, you may not get high level also due to lack of designers' thought
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發表於 9-5-2009 20:36:49 | 顯示全部樓層
嗯,所以評grade要互相配合,缺一不可
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 樓主| 發表於 9-5-2009 20:39:13 | 顯示全部樓層
又要我背文?
那一個大海, 是我遙不可及的目標
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發表於 9-5-2009 20:41:08 | 顯示全部樓層
冇人要你背文

只係同你講下就算真係有人咁都幫你評到grade,同出黎果個一定有落差
如果係咁 評黎做乜??
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 樓主| 發表於 9-5-2009 20:42:26 | 顯示全部樓層
求個安心!
人做好多non-productive things because of scare and fear
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發表於 9-5-2009 20:48:55 | 顯示全部樓層
= =既然係咁我試下評啦

content黎講我覺得對到題,而且夠point 3
但develop就唔多夠(我就咁睇),好多point同埋有對比
如果配合埋自然的sentence,應該有4,如果自然之餘亦有wide vocab,wide pattern 就4-5個位啦

但係我就咁睇個introduction 似乎過分用太多pattern或者搞到好奇怪
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