Task 2 topic 1
Brief idea:
Dear Editor,
#1 : Introduction : The argument between stay at home and send to school is no use if children are not classified by their age and their needs
#2 : Briefly talk about the definition of children : young and grown. They need different teaching method, due to different needs in different stage.
#3 - #5 : Talking about young children first, support teaching at home rather than send to school
#3 : In children' view e.g. Their needs, the things they need to learn, mind
#4 : In parents' view e.g. knowledge and time required, difficulties faced
#5 : Other advantages e.g. avoid facing unmoral teachers
#6 - #8 : Talking about grown children, support going to school
#6 : In children' view e.g freedom, auto. learn... , make contrast to #3
#7 : In parents' view make contrast to #4
#8 : Other advantages e.g. social manners ...
#9 To conclude no best method to teach but better to teach, parents should find out more method to help their children growth healthy
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