通識題[個人成長]:你同意老師可以與學生做朋友嗎?

試作1號機

新年功課，就係要答左呢題去。
老師要求300字...用英文的。
但係，大家係到答既時候用中文就得啦。
我而家諗住好似以下咁答，煩請問位指出我既錯處。

I do not agree teacher and student can be friend.It's because i believe that teacher must be fair.If student make friend with teacher,it is not fair to other student beacuse teacher is possible to partial the students who make friend with him.

我知咁樣寫可能1分都冇...佐我只係諗到咁多...仲差D咩?應該點寫?各位可以教教我嗎?

玩完啦

你後面個句應該話may possible to partial the students who make friend with him

sTanLeyl殤華x

新年功課，就係要答左呢題去。
老師要求300字...用英文的。
但係，大家係到答既時候用中文就得啦。
我而家 ...
試作1號機 發表於 18-2-2010 21:47

你都黎左呢到啊....@@

wong87

可用朋輩的影響作引用
提升自信~增長學問~有傾訴既對象~請教既對象~
老師做朋友比同學做朋友既比較

however
新聞有講老師飛禮學生你都可以講既,你反對
跟住就可以講影響自尊心......影響自尊心其中一項因素係朋輩影響
老師偏坦學生
時日變遷
老師的年紀未必可以請楚了解身為學生的自己的心情
老師有處事的經驗,以朋友的身分幫助學生解決困難未必係好事
未經過困難,不會解決困難

hk6e28hk

哇....
你地F幾
我睇唔明你地講咩

p445hkk20001

哇....
你地F幾
我睇唔明你地講咩
hk6e28hk 發表於 11-3-2010 01:25 AM

F.4
我覺得 呢D題目 唔係通識 似中文口試討論題目咁- -

天才A

列point先
同埋要正反立論
同意:結交友誼    有助學生學習.....
不同意:乘機同老師抽水 例如拎考試題目等等 ...
kokokokokakuz11 發表於 19-2-2010 22:19

同感...

老師只係講左 盡量唔好一面倒...
要正反兩面都講...

之後一個point 加2個 證據...

分數/2 就係段落的數目....

-終場ソ使者-

Point,arguments,demonstrations should be written separately,it makes a difficulty for teacher(or marker) to know what is your main point.The organization marks would be reduced if only one paragraph is used.Finally,you should write a conclusion to emphasize your main point,it is more powerful!

300-words-structure is a 6~8 marks question,you should give 2~3 arguments for your organization.