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發表於 8-3-2009 19:31:04 | 顯示全部樓層 |閱讀模式
What do u think this essay writen by me, as a Form four student??


Title: Do schools rely too much on homework?

Contemporary learning theory suggests that homework is a poor way to advance student learning. Not only do students progress at different ages, but they also do not all go through the same unchanging set of stages. Just as not all students are naturally right-handed and should not be made to write in this fashion, distinctive learning styles are developed and often persist over an entire lifetime. Sending work that is crucial to core learning home — where resources differ and where teachers can gain little sense of who did the work or why deficiencies occur — often impedes learning.
A modest amount of independent work, say two hours a day, is appropriate for high-school students, but teachers with adequate resources and experience in assessing individual learning styles should be available to aid children. Even many of homework's defenders now concede that homework does not advance test scores for elementary-school students. They fall back on the claim, for which they don't offer proof, that homework sows good study habits. Yet play could be a better way to encourage good habits. In fact, some research has shown that when children study because they enjoy it, they learn better, and what they learn stays with them longer.
Both students and adult workers deserve time for the kind of unstructured play that encourages creativity and fosters interest in learning. Work as the solution to all our woes is reform on the cheap and at the expense of all. Children, like all of us, are more than recipients of school knowledge. They are siblings and community members, budding artists, musicians and athletes. They are natural inventors and scientists and spiritual beings. Do we allow our children to exercise these selves?
Japan is often cited as an example of the effectiveness of longer school days and extensive homework. Yet Japan's economy is in deep trouble today. Even some of its leaders now concede that workaholism among workers and students is a barrier to innovation. Workers who spend so much of their lives in narrow cognitive tasks are unlikely to be broadly creative in redesigning existing products or revising national economic priorities. The Japanese educational ministry apparently now recognizes that the emphasis on long school hours must be re-examined.
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發表於 8-3-2009 20:20:24 | 顯示全部樓層
講得衰D,又係學人亂用詞組,以為用果樣野就代表高分-.-

理下你D part of speech sin la,

同埋你一開始已經做衰自己個名
咩意思? 想問下
What do u think this essay writen by me, as a Form four student??

我都希望唔係你寫,唔係都幾得人驚
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發表於 8-3-2009 22:51:43 | 顯示全部樓層
我自己D英文都唔掂
唔方便評論...
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發表於 8-3-2009 23:53:05 | 顯示全部樓層
我英文都係唔係太好,都係收回我講幾句話
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發表於 9-3-2009 00:06:26 | 顯示全部樓層
我無睇到篇野  我written english都好差
但係我應該zend少少野  都係好多中四中六生犯ge
就係學左d新字 新野  就好刻意咁用佢出黎 諗住可以高分d
但係咁樣做 分分鐘係用錯 或者用得唔恰當  所以要留意呀
考試唔係鬥用得多勁字   你試下睇會考拎a ge範文 有大部份都無咩勁字 係好顯淺文字 但係logic好好 舖排得好好
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發表於 9-3-2009 00:34:08 | 顯示全部樓層
GRAMMAR 可以慢慢改,但係邏輯上就一定要改..

佢連連接詞都慳左, 結果係無哂上文下理關係
同埋每段中心思想係乜我都唔太見到, 同埋好似少左個conclusion.
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發表於 9-3-2009 02:54:27 | 顯示全部樓層
我就咁睇左一次 我覺得.... 好怪@@
其實第一句已經怪@@ 第一句GRAMMAR錯 真係好傷
Contemporary learning theory suggests that (doing) homework is a poor way to advance student learning.

d字呢 放落去唔係話錯grammar 但唔會有人咁放落去用  總之係怪雞
好似強行加d生字落去用咁
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發表於 9-3-2009 10:30:19 | 顯示全部樓層
睇到眼冤. 不予置評.
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發表於 9-3-2009 18:50:58 | 顯示全部樓層
我從來都唔會咁"做作" =.="
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發表於 9-3-2009 19:03:59 | 顯示全部樓層
本帖最後由 piyopiyo 於 9-3-2009 19:33 編輯

睇左頭果段已經 O 曬咀
水蛇春咁長ge句子...要show你識relative clauses,咩participle係唔洗夾硬寫d水蛇春出泥...
好機械,係度諗用d深ge字去撻人不如諗下點令個篇文生動d
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