1
- amount of tourists!? amount of sugar/energy/substance/workload; nubmer of people
- the news? what news?
- the last year? the last day, the person on earth, etc
- what is "in a short term"?
2
- the problem really is the "sharply descending number"? should better be the "decrease in number"
- "After shopping" is strange but still okay because we usually use the word shopping as a noun
- find out vs find
- are misguided and bought
- furious? too much
- spread out? 傳開? Do you need an "out"?
- make somebody alertto something (the people are not alerting!)
- happen! Intransitive!!!
- At that time...
- "No matter ... it is too late and the problem has become far beyond our redemption" Are you really talking about something that "may" or "will probably" happen?
- tourist's numbers 旅客既數目!!
- no one (no hypen needed)
- no confidence to do something (冇自信做something); no confidence in somebody/something (對somebody/something冇信心)
- confidence: no article is needed; better if you say: no one will have any confidence ("anymore" not needed)
I have mistakes, too. Let's discuss.
遲d再講 [[bao_42]]
發表於 1-4-2009 23:22:22