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Sichuan Earthquake in One Year Report
On 12 May 2008, a massive earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richer scale at Sichuan Province's Wenchuan City. The Wenchuan earthquake left 88,000 people dead or missing and near 400,000 houses injured.
[Deleted] After the earthquake, the Hong Kong Committee [Deleted] UNICEF  called for action to help the victims in Sichuan. More than HK$140 million have been raise for emergency relief from Hong Kong [Deleted]. In addition to the funds received from China and, other national committees and offices, UNICEF has raised more than HK$280 million in total. UNICEF is working for the Government of China and non-government organizations on various recovery projects including health and nutrition, water and sanitation, education and child protection.
lv8402 發表於 12-1-2010 19:00

固然我也有可能出錯，但甚無難度可言。
再者，每行錯處並不止一個；竟然連題目也出錯？

m8姐

你冇野呀!?

jones10

Sichan Earthquake (in) One Year Report

  On 12 May 2008, a massive earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richer scale struck

Sichuan Province's Wenchuan Country. The Wenchuan earthquake left 88,000

people dead or missed and near 400,000 injured.

After the earthquake Immediately, the Hong Kong Committee for UNCEF  called

for action to help the victims in Sichuan. More than HK$140 million has been

raised for emergency relief from Hong Kong alone. In addition to the funds

received from China, other national committees and offices, UNICEF has raised

more than HK$280 million in total. UNICEF is working in the Government of

China and non-government organizations on various recovery projects included

health and nutrition,  water and sanitation, education and child protection.



changed with green!

jones10

lv8402 發表於 12-1-2010 19:18

OK???[[ipk (26)]]

jones10

對此活動不予置評。

固然我也有可能出錯，但甚無難度可言。
NuclearAsh核灰 發表於 12-1-2010 19:08

=  ="""

jones10

OK-,-
錯左4個
已經好勁
lv8402 發表於 12-1-2010 19:38

if no one all correct or no more guys join , what should u do@@?

poohqqq

Correct the mistakes in the article below. There is one mistake in each line(toal 11 mistakes).
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Sichan Earthquake One Year Report

In 12 May 2008, a massive earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richer scale struck

Sichuan Province's Wenchuan Country. The Wenchuan earthquake leave 88,000

people dead or missing and near 400,000 injured.

Immediately after the earthquake, the Hong Kong Committee for UNCEF called

for action to helping the victims in Sichuan. More than HK$140 million has been

raise for emergency relief from Hong Kong alone. In addition to the funds

received from China, other national committes and offices, UNICEF has raised

more than HK$280 million in total. UNICEF is working of the Government of

China and non-government organizations on various recovery projects include

health and nutrition, water and sanitation, educate and child protection.

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